Re-edit my vinyl design

I realised my vinyl design don't really look great. There's too many color which made it really ugly. Naf and Kez pointed that out. Thank goodness. haha. So I changed it to more simpler colour.
Looks better now doesn't it? haha

Oh!I also showed Alan my new storyboard. He said that it's much better but I need to add certain stuff like how Kay noticed Mark (the hot guy ) coming into the music store. And I also need to show how the music store looks like. Inside and outside. Oh mann I need to design my environment. aaaa so many things to do. Holiday is coming but it don't feel like a holiday.