My voice recording

I let Alan listened to my latest voice recording. He said that it's good but the part when Riley screamed sounded a little fake and forced. Thankfully he told me to leave it cuz he said that it's hard to scream as if you're falling down. So my recording is finalized! YES! Oh yeah he also said that he didn't like any of my chracters' personality. I asked him what I should do and he told me to just contunie what I'm doing :)