My voice recording

I let Alan listened to my latest voice recording. He said that it's good but the part when Riley screamed sounded a little fake and forced. Thankfully he told me to leave it cuz he said that it's hard to scream as if you're falling down. So my recording is finalized! YES! Oh yeah he also said that he didn't like any of my chracters' personality. I asked him what I should do and he told me to just contunie what I'm doing :)

Re-edit my vinyl design

I realised my vinyl design don't really look great. There's too many color which made it really ugly. Naf and Kez pointed that out. Thank goodness. haha. So I changed it to more simpler colour.
Looks better now doesn't it? haha

Oh!I also showed Alan my new storyboard. He said that it's much better but I need to add certain stuff like how Kay noticed Mark (the hot guy ) coming into the music store. And I also need to show how the music store looks like. Inside and outside. Oh mann I need to design my environment. aaaa so many things to do. Holiday is coming but it don't feel like a holiday.

My posters

Here are my Vinyl cover designs for my first scene. I hope is fine.




And this is my hot guy poster. Im still not sure what's his name. haha